| Remember, more often than not, a sentence correction question will present you with a combination of several errors at once. They must all be corrected, and no other errors must be introduced. The following sections deal with the different errors separately, but the example questions may present you with multiple errors, so be careful! |
When I saw Mum struggling through the door with the shopping, I remembered I promised to help her.
struggling through the door with the shopping, I remembered I
struggled through the door with the shopping, I had remembered I
struggling through the door with the shopping, I had remembered that I had
struggling through the door with the shopping, I remembered that I had
struggled through the door with the shopping, I had remembered that I had
I have colour-coded the parts of the answer that differ from each other. As you can see, the phrase "... through the door with the shopping, I ..." is identical in each option and can be ignored for the purpose of sentence correction.
Beautifully restored to its original condition, the antique dealer displayed the cabinet in his window.
Beautifully restored to its original condition, the antique dealer displayed the cabinet in his window.
The antique dealer, beautifully restored to its original condition, displayed the cabinet in his window.
The antique dealer beautifully restored the cabinet to its original condition and displayed it in his window.
The antique dealer restored the cabinet beautifully to its original condition and displayed it in his window.
The antique dealer displayed the cabinet, beautifully restored to its original condition, in his window.
All the options here are grammatically correct, so we must judge them on their meaning and apply some common sense. The original sentence (and, of course, option (A)) and option (B) imply that it was the antique dealer who had been restored to his original condition (although the pronoun "its" is used, which should be a give-away that something is wrong) - clearly this is stupid! Options (C) and (D) both imply that the antique dealer was the one who restored the cabinet, but there is no suggestion of this in the original, and we must keep as much of the meaning of the original sentence as common sense allows. Only option (E) makes sense in this question. Hence option (E) is the correct answer, even though its meaning differs slightly from that of (A).
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